Hey People's!

[marikunin]

Hey people! :3

Mind posting some comments on my recent slew of fics? :)

I'd really appreciate some feedback! I need some encouragement to stave off my writers block.

Comments, suggestions, constructive criticism, all are welcome!

Thanks!

Comments

[uberta.livejournal.com]

Daaaaang, hon, why am I so inspiring to you? ;P

Right off the top of my head, I have a critique and a note.

Critique
You can't use past and present tense sentences one after another. You do this sometimes.

Note
I have four children. The oldest is six, the twins are 14 months, and the boy (who is adopted) is roughly 14.5 months. By coincidence, he is like a triplet to the twins. You don't need to edit this for your story, though. Just thought you already knew. I should really write a Who Are These People? guide in my journal.

Anyway, like I said -- dang, why me?! :P I do feel loved from ya!